冰可 --
Do you speak English? Sorry I had to write in foreign language.
My comments:
First, where's the window? Where's the light? No light, no life.
Second, it is too commercial, not really for residential living.
Third, no more than three colors, that's the rule for interior design
Fourth, no focue point, you need to rest your eyes on something
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Generally speaking, no bad, keep up the good work :-)